I completed your game. Thank you for providing a Linux build.
Here are my thoughts:
- I disliked the maze section of the game. Sure, the random objects scattered around the maze made it easier to traverse, but I personally find mazes unengaging unless it includes danger, like a monster roaming the maze. Adding a slow-moving enemy or time pressure would make navigating more tense.
- As for the second part, the jumping platformer. First of all, thank you for providing a checkpoint, Without the checkpoint, I likely would have stopped playing. Now, I felt the character to be too "heavy" and the character physics to be odd. The air control is just too limiting. Giving the player more control mid-air would make it a lot more engaging (see: Garry's Mod BHOP).
Nonetheless, I'm looking forward to playing your games in the future!