I liked the art and music and sound effects, very endearing and a lot of storytelling without much words, however...
You got a lot of mechanics, my advice is to focus on only a few . I didn't have fun when moving between zones I guess you are making me use my memory which I like but clicking map and selecting destination then go then move to the booth was testing my patiente and I'm older now so I was tired. I think you could make a fun real time locomotion to make it funnier tho.
Keep refining this idea, onwards