One thing I noticed: Gur punva vf pnyyrq n 'punva' sbe n ernfba: vg fher frrzf yvxr vg qbrfa'g fcernq 'yngrenyyl'. Rirel gvzr gung fbzrbar qvrf, vg'f orpnhfr gurl erzrzorerq gur cerivbhf crefba va yvar fcrpvsvpnyyl -- abg whfg "fbzrbar jub qvrq bs gur phefr", fcrpvsvpnyyl gur cerivbhf crefba va gur punva.
Juvpu vf tbbq, orpnhfr lrnu, bgurejvfr V jbhyq vaqrrq unir cynhfvovyvgl dhrfgvbaf nobhg ubj uhznavgl vfa'g nyernql rkgvapg. Ohg vs vg pna bayl fcernq 'yvarneyl', gura vgf novyvgl gb xvyy gehyl qnatrebhf ahzoref bs crbcyr vf arhgrerq; vg erznvaf dhvgr ubeevslvat gb guvax nobhg, ohg vg qbrfa'g cerfrag fhfcrafvba bs qvforyvrs vffhrf gur jnl rkcbaragvny fcernq jbhyq.