Enh, I think the ending was perfect the way it was. Gurer'yy arire or nal xvaq bs qrgnvyf nobhg jung fbeg bs crefba gur erfrnepure (jubfr anzr V vagragvbanyyl qvq *abg* qrpbqr gur frpbaq V ernyvmrq gur qernz zrffntr fgnegrq jvgu "V nz") jnf, orpnhfr abobql xabjf gur qrgnvyf bs ubj rknpgyl gur phefr jbexf, naq abobql'f jvyyvat gb evfx fgnegvat n arj punva ol vairfgvtngvat. Vg'f cbffvoyr gung gur phefr ernyyl jbexf ba 'erzrzorevat', naq lbh unir gb unir xabja gurz va gur svefg cynpr sbe gur punva gb pbagvahr; ohg vg'f nyfb cbffvoyr gung gur phefr whfg jbexf ba 'xabjvat', naq yrneavat jung xvaq bs crefba gurl jrer jbhyq qb whfg nf jryy. Gur erfrnepure qvqa'g jnag gb gnxr gung evfx, naq nyy jr'yy rire xabj nobhg uvz jnf gung ur jnf fbzrobql pyrire rabhtu gb svther bhg jung unccrarq, naq urebvp rabhtu gb fnpevsvpr uvzfrys jura ur tbg gur punapr gb raq vg.
b7. Naq n ovt b7 gb Naavr, gbb.