Really proper. I am a huge fan of the map style, size and frequency. Bite size doses is probably the only way to keep a map this complicated somewhat functional for a dm. Good luck to the cartographer, but that is just the way I like it. I also think the back page is particularly strong. Two tables that pretty much round out the flavor and content for the entire package. The whole thing is pretty dense for 16 pages, but I feel like 16 pages is a pretty tight constraint and you managed to succeed in fitting a ton of flavor. If I could offer one critique -- the layout, while very clean, doesn't feel entirely functional to my GM preferences. I would have to be doing A LOT of flipping back and forth. Finally, cool Guardian Beasts / Rampage Potion situation. Even outside the jam I think this does a great job of invoking the retro game feel. Nice job.