So, I played through this visual novel. I don't know if this was meant to be written ironically to be funny or not, but it had a vibe of it was so bad, it's good kind of funny. The joke at the study desk and later with the plot twist reveal from the female character was hilarious, in my opinion.
The art and music were beautifully done, as well. Although, Ronnie's hoodie has a light blue glow to his clothes during the first scene when it's evening. Otherwise, the art matched with the events of the story.
Another issue I noticed was that the menu buttons in the game menu were on the right and not on the left, which would overlap with other buttons and text in the game menu screen. So, you might want to change their location.
Finally, the writing was a bit all over the place with the hopping points of views and the story being written in first-person and not third-person omniscient. Luckily, I could understand and follow along with the story well enough, but sometimes scenes abruptly transitioned from one area to the next, which gave me a bit of whiplash, especially with needing to read who's speaking or thinking to know whose point of view I'm reading in at any given time.
Otherwise, it was a funny, enjoyable, and short enough read with a happy and sweet ending. Good job!