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Cool and focused art direction. You've managed to blend hockey references in a Kurosawa-inspired adventure; this is quite the achievement! Illustrations and maps are pretty beautiful, and the adventure is quite interesting to run either as part of a campaign or a heavily stylised one-shot.

I do have to say the layout is a bit all over the place and inconsistent for my taste. Some rooms and monsters' descriptions spill over to the next page, item descriptions aren't contained in the right column and end up mixed with the names, and at some point, the whole layout switches from two columns to a single one. I feel it detracts from the entire adventure, which, in itself, is pretty good without all this noise.
 

Thanks for the feedback. I was super crunched for time and honestly trying to fit so much in so quickly that the final pass is below where I'd like it to be! It's my first time actually assembling or submitting something to a jam like this, so the learning curve is real and steep. Thanks for the feedback, I'll aim to do better in revisions and future jams.