The style is great, I love everything being drawn on paper. Wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing at first, but I figured out about halfway through. I'm pretty sure the intended mechanic was you're supposed to pick up food and bring it to the tables, but I didn't really have to pick up the food, I just had to walk across the restaurant spamming space bar. Another issue was that starting a new game didn't reset your progress on food and poems delivered. Overall I think the idea and presentation are great but there are just some issues with the gameplay.
Very solid for a first game jam, though