Hooks: Excellent use of a training/teaching mechanic as a possible hook. Haven't seen anyone else do that yet. Disappointed the promise of authentic OYC Cheese Pizza wasn't a hook though. Oh wait... maybe it wouldn't be a pizza but a Short Island Coney Dog. So much flavor in this adventure. Like riding shields, triangular flat bread, etc. I think this adventure seems like it is probably a lower level adventure compared to a level 4-6 adventure. Cleaning up some of the layout would definitely make this a little easier to run at the table. I also wish you made better use of the other inspiration titles, but you live by the TMNT reference, you die by the TMNT reference, heh. Aside from these minor quibbles, this is a solid entry. Great work!