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CORPSE TALK LIVE DAY 2 Reviews

Since I didn't have time to enter this year, I can't do a traditional vote, but I can comment and take the time to go over some of the popular favorites and my own. For a first adventure, this is a good entry. 
I do mean it when I say, take it back to the layout. Cut some of the fat out of the text. Study how Shadowdark DC and adventures are laid out and bring it back to everyone on itch. Then ping me if you do.

Day 2 reviews can be found here, time-stamped 

YOUTUBE 
Inspiration 3 Usability 2 Vibes 2

Stay F@#ckin Rotten! Keep designing! EFP

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my gratitude here man!


watching you try to read it was painful enough.  I got waaaaay too much shit in here.

gonna cut the map layout to a quarter of what it is and get to the good stuff earlier.

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There is something in there. Just needs some layout worn. Cutting the extras.

And really getting the scope and scale in line. It's all learning. If do go back and edit it. Hit me up. More than happy to take a look.

There is something in there. Just needs some layout worn. Cutting the extras.

And really getting the scope and scale in line. It's all learning. If do go back and edit it. Hit me up. More than happy to take a look.