- Vibes: Great!
- NES booklet format.
- Gorgeous art/map/aesthetics.
- Literally added staples in the middle... bro, you're making us all look bad (great job =P)
- Lots of interesting little mechanics (e.g., river rafting, exploration, signs etc.)
- Inspiration:
- Appreciate how directly these were called out right away. Clear, concise. Would have preferred a 'bit' more meat here, but I get space was an issue.
- Usability:
- Appreciate the clear/concise background section. Simple, but effective.
- Good use of hyperlinks (including on the map itself - very nice)!
- Not sure how I feel about using multiple d6's for the navigation checks. I'm sure you had a good reason, but it feels fiddly to me (maybe just a preference thing).
- A lot of this is very short/simple, but it just works (not overcomplicated).
- Creature stat blocks on relevant pages. Great!
Great entry! Could see this winning the whole thing. Good job!