Thank you so much for taking your time to write out your comment. I’m happy to hear that you liked my game overall :D
Don’t worry about your comment being long, I appreciate your effort to write out your feedback and it means a lot to me!
I think you have a good point about the amount of “…”. It was definitely the easiest way to add in periods of silence but it makes sense that it may not end up being the best for user experience. I can definitely find a way to work in some narration/monologue/whatever else fits to replace some dots while retaining the same effect/atmosphere/message.