Hi! First of all thank you for playing my case I really appricate it! Also yeah, I've realised that there are some issues with the grammar. This was my first time making a case so I was a bit eager to get it out however I do plan to come back and amend these errors in an update soon, but currently I'm focusing on writing for case 2(I've currently finished writing the investigation segment).
I'm also glad you like how the characters were written! I had fun with them especially the culprit. Also to clear up the confusion, Percy is male and it's stated so in the court record. Although your not the first person to comment on that as some people have been a bit confused on his gender as well byeah.
Again thank you playing my case and taking the time to give feedback! I will makee sure to keep this in mind when updating case 1 and making case 2!