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spoilers.

i found this interesting, but for one, the script could really use some revision. there are a lot of times homophones got mixed up, and the punctuation is off in many places, and some dialogue feels slightly off. it seemed like you confused the left and right sides of the taxi, which was thankfully relatively inconsequential. it also seems like percy gets referred to with both they/them and he/him, but since it wasn't established very clearly, i was initially confused and thought it was an error.

i enjoyed the obvious villain somewhat. i found him entertainingly dickish. also, the moment right before he appears onscreen, i was wondering who the obvious villain would be, and then i'm met with the guy who would clearly know how to take apart a taxi. it was funny, and i thought his breakdown was, too. the revisualization sequence at the end of the episode for what was immediately obvious was slightly annoying, though.

i liked wanda rambler (best name from the new characters) for being a rambling-type character who was nothing but helpful for once. i enjoyed a lot of the jokes in general. the canon characters also acted about how i would expect them to, so good job with that.

the only other issue i took with the gameplay was the testimony where you had to present the victim's profile for information that is completely absent from the court record and that you're expected to remember and assume the profile would relate to, but the other objections were logical, and i could figure them out.

if you continue this project, i'd be willing to check out how it continues. good luck with it.

Hi! First of all thank you for playing my case I really appricate it! Also yeah, I've realised that there are some issues with the grammar. This was my first time making a case so I was a bit eager to get it out however I do plan to come back and amend these errors in an update soon, but currently I'm focusing on writing for case 2(I've currently finished writing the investigation segment). 

I'm also glad you like how the characters were written! I had fun with them especially the culprit. Also to clear up the confusion, Percy is male and it's stated so in the court record. Although your not the first person to comment on that as some people have been a bit confused on his gender as well byeah. 

Again thank you playing my case and taking the time to give feedback! I will makee sure to keep this in mind when updating case 1 and making case 2!