this is really beautiful! ive been having it saved to play later for some time, and im not dissapointed.
ill be real, at first, the narrative didnt get me but then it suddenly clicked and i was like. Oh Yeah. Fearfully this Fucks. 2 lovers left in the wreckage of a prophet of a new age, the sun saint. both of them being magically bound to him beyond words. especially the scene wherein dantes suddenly peaking in on their private interaction and neither of them even care.. its really telling and well written. salvi taking dante breaking his bond as far more of a profound violation than its existence. the constrast between both of them humanizing him deeply by calling him "idiot" and also treating him like a god, letting him watch in on their privacy and just.. accepting it. sorry thats still insane to me.
i always love stories about the people left behind the "main character". the disciples to the grand prophet. and just the detail of like oh yeah theyre killing their saint because they know he has a spine and hes more useful to them as a story than a person with will and motive. kill the soul. thats the type of political drama i LIVE FOR. yesss...
i took a peek at your patreon, and im very excited for the remake!! i particuraly ADORE divinas new design. i feel like you were slightly limited here by making them a customizable mc but she looks so fucking cool now. i can feel the exhaustion in her eyes.. auwugh. (also HELL YEAH give salvi stupid little glasses. i live for that shit)
one last thing: my polyamory loving heart adores the salvi/dante/divina dynamic pre canon. its so funny. it reminds me of that one tumblr post that goes like "polyamorous triad but its 2 people trying to coax the third one into the relationship like a stray cat. they both get the third guy in bed and theyre like okok he seems calm.. this is nice he should know we love him. while the third guy is like wow i am in love. sucks that they secretly hate me and want to kill me with hammers for no reason." its great. salvi never change you freak.