Post by Yanonako in UPDATE 6/15/2020! comments

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Hi SweetChiel! :)

And there are the new outfits! I'm so happy! :) The outfits look really great! I also directly watched the full-body preview at Patreon and in complete they look even better. Thanks for your effort with it, it was worth it! :)

Really Arya, a rock ?! What a practical thinking man. XD

Winter background:
Hm ... I have to say that I find the first version better. Here the firs / pines are not covered with snow, but in the new version they look ... how should I explain that correctly ... they look "flat", although that's not the right word. The branches go in two directions, which is usually not the case. There should be many branches that tend to hang down when they are covered with a lot of snow. I was so free and googled and attached a few links with examples here.

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/fIzvzgWg08k/maxresdefault.jpg

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/788zs1CpEvo/maxresdefault.jpg

https://i.etsystatic.com/6176876/r/il/16f64c/683264140/il_570xN.683264140_pieq.j...

https://st3.depositphotos.com/1664950/15111/i/1600/depositphotos_151115062-stock...

https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-GJO2f8vDJMs/WmTTZxc8nNI/AAAAAAAAf0E/8VStxo6bAV4oU8hUz...

https://a-static.besthdwallpaper.com/schnee-bedeckte-kiefern-tapete-1920x600-444...

Good luck / have fun programming and don't overdo it. :)

Stay healthy and best regards :)

SweetChiel4 years ago (1 edit)

Hi, Yanonako!
I'm glad to see you like their winter robes! x'D

and--aaahhh!! Where were you when I was in a dire need of pine tree refs? Q_Q I really like the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd pictures! The ones I found are not as good and I can't seem to draw the snow correctly--I think it's because I don't quite understand how snow works. There's only sunny & rainy season here :'D

I'll definitely keep these refs for future polishing! I'm going to focus on programming for now though. So I'll polish this background along with the winter forest background later ~~but do forgive me if I forgot to polish them~~ *cough*

Yes, I'm resting right now to pace myself :'3
You too, take care and stay healthy over there!

Yanonako4 years ago

Xes absolutely. :)

Well, I was still a quiet observer or rather not yet at itch.io and patreon. XD

Just to make it clear: I think it is important to give honest feedback, even if it is negative. So, under no circumstances will I hang myself on it if you don't refine / improve the background. :)
Also, honestly, I'm happy to help if you need other reference images. :)

Thank you, I will. :)

SweetChiel4 years ago

Of course! I really appreciate your honest thought about the background ^.^)/ critiques will definitely help me to improve so I welcome it with open arms! *my proofreaders have given me lots of critiques for my script and as I read the many fixes/comments plastered on the .doc file, I really like them-- I think I'm becoming a masochist 😂*

And yes! I'll definitely try and contact you whenever I'm not sure about something later? Um, would you mind leaving your email here? ><

Yanonako4 years ago

I'm glad you see it that way. :) I already had problems with the topic, so I wanted to make it clear.

Feel free to contact me if you like. I really like to help. :) I'm sure you still have my contact details. Do you remember the pledge from May 14th, 2020? That was me, I just changed my name here recently. :) If necessary, I can also send you an email again. :)

SweetChiel4 years ago

Ooooh! Yes!
I just remembered about it! Thank you very much for your patronage ^///^ I'll definitely contact you if I have anything else I'm in doubt/need opinion with!