I absolutely enjoyed this vn. This is something I should see on this jam not gonna lie, like the first game I played in the jam: commitment to the toxicity. Art is really pretty, I will not lie on that. Characters and their characterization are pretty good, as well as the writing and setting wise. It’s an interesting shared consciousness trope (after death type) going on. Tho understandable this was made in game jam constraints/restrictions, I wish the latter part of the game was explored better, especially the deja vu moments, but again, for the game jam constraints and the time being, I think you did well. I enjoyed it, and hopefully, whatever major updates it will have in the future, would make the game better, maybe even after story especially the post-credits scene, but I’m asking too much on that. I think for minor issues I saw, it will be typo... and I guess history? Tho there’s a way to go back to a previous text.... my key for that is dead, and I’m unsure if there’s a way to reconfigure certain buttons in Ren’Py.
Thank you very much for enjoying our game! It means so much to us. We definitely would like to expand on the story if possible, as this was made under a month hence had time restrictions. Apologies for the typos haha. As for history, we removed it to favour a cleaner menu. We'll consider adding it in though, if we plan to update it.
Once again, your comment is much appreciated!