Ok I tried to play this, but there are a lot of issues.
First, the very important one. You never included a file so we can actually run your game. At all. This is not properly deployed. I managed to get it to run by adding an MZ project file to it, but other non-RPGMaker devs won't know to try that trick.
Then I played it. First I was trapped in a prison, I try to run for the door it just shuts in my face and I die. Instead I had to do the non-obvious choice to walk up to the guard ON PURPOSE who has shown they intend to kill me, and I take them out. What clue does the player have to do that? Why would they even consider that? No one in their right mind would try that, especially knowing they are an unarmed prisoner and the guard intends to hurt them.
So I get out. Then I end up in a hallway that goes forever. I get a game over after a while. No clues, nothing to guide me at all. Not even a hint how to approach this.
I quit here. You need to do a better job guiding the player at least. And fix the deployment so a player can play it properly please.
And finally, why can't I save?