Quick, simple, and cute. A good jam game!
Things I liked:
- It's very direct and to-the-point. Nothing too complicated or overly long.
- Even when I'm not sure what to do next, it doesn't take long to find the answer or brute force my way to it.
- The maps are reasonable sizes and look nice.
- Multiple endings (even if they aren't very different)
Things I did not like:
- There are a fair few grammar issues, and having the ! marks always a space away from the word looks odd to me.
- There are some issues with player guidance, like where certain NPCs are or what I need to buy.
- Some interactions need to be repeated or a choice needs to be made when they could just be automatically done for the player.
I don't think the issues are a big deal in a game of this size, but it would be more annoying if the game were longer. I hope this game has helped you improve your game making skills!