Cute Mumei sprite.
I like the small light effect surrounding Mumei.
Good use of DDOLBANG sprites!
The story is nice and I liked having Kronii appear everytime to help Mumei. Cute ending!
Some improvement suggestions:
- Looking at the console I see a lot of errors. Make sure you check them and fix the issues! Most of them were about missing or improper signal connections.
- There was a dialogic error about trying to start a timeline that doesn't exist. Make sure you've tested all your NPC dialogues before shipping your game! XD (I believe it was triggered by one of the two shades that are side by side near the middle of the village)
- Consider putting your game into an aspect ratio fitter control, so that no matter the size of the window, your game displays in the intended aspect ratio. This is important because I originally had the browser window in a square shape and completely missed the timer at the top of the screen as well as having HUGE sprites for Kronii and Shiori when they showed up in dialogue sections.
- I got a funny bug where I reached the memory item after time ran out (apparently I could still walk), so I got to see the memory but then got the "time rewound" message. It still counted as if I got it, which is cool. XD
Good job submitting your game!