I really dig the idea, a really cool take on the concept with the End of World!
Both dialogues and dialogue chocies were pretty entertaining, I wanted to try out more of them and check the holos' reactions. I liked the idea with items and tarot cards. I would really like to see a final version of the game and what happens when I collect all of the possible cards.
Altought the art was not complete, I definitely liked the concept. The B.A. Shiorin is beautifully terrifying. I would dig all other holos in this True Angels style, maybe with some abstract backgrounds and audio to match the eerie End feel.
Also kudos for making the game in the Flash, it's pretty rare these days to see a true Flash game.
In terms of feedback:
- I would add some highlight around the item when it can be used (unless you want to slightly hide it like Biboo). Sometimes I was confused if the item on the screen is something that I got from conversation or something that I can use right now
- I don't know if there is an inventory UI, could not find it, but would be nice to have one. Alternatively you could just display list of gathered items in the top
Thank you for making this game ^_^