Oh, btw, here's some typos I found:
This is my also my office. #2 'my's
Eventually landing on a page that contained a small part of story for kids.
of a story, no?
I couldnt help but notice her sharp fangs getting closer and closer.
couldn't, no?
At one point I called some of them potions, but she corrected me and told me they were chemicals
Missing a period at the end
I didn't know where to go, so I just ran in every direciton, until I found the main door
direction, no?
{cps=30}You could introduce me to them..{/cps}{cps=4} {/cps}{cps=30}If you want.{/cps} ##only two dots
I cannot forgive myself for making such mistake.
such a mistake, no?