This was very compelling and a perfect way to spend a chilly afternoon! I'm very interested in Jackie and really want to know more about what's going on in her head.
*SPOILERS*
Obviously, she spends a lot of her brainpower trying to keep her freak-flag down around the protagonist, lol. You said that you don't plan to continue this; is there any chance that you might share what's going on here? I have a lot of questions, with the biggest being: what is Jackie's PLAN?? You can't just pick up the girl you stalk the love of your life without a plan on how this is going to go down, right? Right?!
+ That scene after seeing the biker for the second time (you know the one) has me gagging. (Can I say that?)
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