If you’re open to it, it might be easier for me to give more detailed feedback and suggestions via Discord, email, or another platform. I could go into more detail and even share some materials.
(English isn't my native language, sorry)
So I've been working on a YouTube channel about GameDev, so I'll now post updates there and stuff. Here's the discord:
https://discord.com/invite/GZz3fTY6gA
And here is my YouTube Page: