Yeah, I don’t know exactly what the vibe you’re going for is here since it’s so early, but I do think Mr. Manager would be a lot more impactful if you’ve spent some time in a more serene and pleasantly illustrated area for a while and then he’s brought in to disrupt the setting.
With all the invisible barriers and intangible floors it was hard to tell where I was expected to go! I like the aesthetics you’re setting up here and I’d love to play a game where I get to explore a place as this robot mouse, but aside from that I think it’s too soon for me to give feedback. Keep going! And keep us updated. :)
If you ever wanna talk about tone and story stuff I’d be happy to chat about it, I love this kind of thing.