do whatever ya want, man
I have found one phrase that I'm not sure a typo or I didn't get it.
You can only hear it now, as it wains.
Is the wains a typo of wanes?
Btw as I read through multiple times, I feel that your phrasing is really impressive. It's been a long time since I have enjoyed a vn this much. Just reading it can make me feel pains and suffer alone with the protagonist