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SPOILER ALERT. I love this work, a piece of art. I have read through it many times, the self hate, the emotions, it hits me hard. Mal feels like it's short for malfunction (?), while Arron feels like it's short for moron/error. 

Both of them are getting crazy, Mal will never be able to love Arr, and the love is never real. If Mal really love Arr, it won't keep a poisionus pet snake. The love is all PHSY's weaved dreams. And poor Paul, ignorant Arr killed him. 

The first poem feels like the grounding technique which is used a lot in psychology. And the very last poem looks like a fever dream, Arron finally decided to face the last scene, Mal. Kill or be killed. Arron is kinda attention whore to me, sry for the wording. I've also finds a lot of self-insertion in the texts.

I have done a translation based on my interpretation of the game, hope you don't mind. 

I have found one phrase that I'm not sure a typo or I didn't get it. 

You can only hear it now, as it wains.

Is the wains a typo of wanes?

Btw as I read through multiple times, I feel that your phrasing is really impressive. It's been a long time since I have enjoyed a vn this much. Just reading it can make me feel pains and suffer alone with the protagonist

I felt the flooding emotions in the text and beautiful illustration. Even though we may experiencing completely different emotions. The word feels a little fancy but you are doing a great job expressing yourself(or the story idk )

I wonder would you give me premission to do the Chinese translation of this work? I want these emotions reach more people.