This is soo lovely. I was very engaged the entire time. The description of combat is really good, honestly crazy good to me.
The characters are also very strong. Kail described this better than I could so I won’t repeat too much, but their dynamic is quite pleasant. I had a moment when reading this where I went “oh yeah the romance!!” and got super excited ^^ I already liked the two of them.
You don’t have to say you’re not good at art and coding also ^^ Your writing is strong enough without all of that. I hope to see your work more!!!