Just wanted to bring up a couple of minor things, like some grammatical stuff and continuity stuff. I really should see about starting over and dropping a save at each one to be more specific with the grammar things... but so far there's only been 3 and they are spaced apart enough to the point I honestly forget. But for the continuity aspect, just did the Nate mall trip and it made references to a Roxy progression thing. I haven't done Roxy since like... Roxy 2? And Nate's next event says it needs Roxy 6 done. So maybe adding a flag for Nate's mall event with the changing room for *after* you do the event with Roxy so the references don't seem out of place.