Got low balled with 6 anomalies but only managed to get 3... I'm not great at these games lol
I think you captured the vibe of Observation Duty pretty well, but I do agree that it does start a little slow, I had probably went 10 minutes without any noticeable changes, though maybe that was just my ineptitude for the genre showing. But otherwise I think anything else I had issues with was already covered by other players.
But I do think you did a good job with designing the areas as well, just cluttered enough to make it easy to overlook something new or something missing.
Good job!