I could write a book on this game, but I will make this as short as possible. I bought this game here on Itch. A review here cannot be seen by anyone so I am writing some of that here.
The game is great, and much better than I expected it to be. The story is good and the renders are really good to excellent. The game is often very funny while keeping an air of mystery and suspense that makes the game very intriguing. Even the music is good and usually fits the mood perfectly.
However, there are a lot of grammar errors, missing words, words in the wrong order and also incorrect words. I am logging EVERY one of these errors. Unfortunately even after attempting to join your discord I have no access to anything that allows me to post these errors and how you can correct them. Trust me when I say, I know what I am doing and I proofread games for many developers. This information will tell you every .rpy file and which line number the error is on, as well as how to fix it. I could post the errors on F9... but I would prefer to avoid that if possible. I am only there to support developers and that does not make me very popular at times. I want to give the game 5 stars but I will hold one hostage until the corrections are made ★★★★ 😉.