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This game could have been awesome.

Instead, it kind of sucks.  I mean it OUTRIGHT sucks because it's dead. I don't give a fuck what his Patreon feed or Discord says. Even if he ever returns to finish this, it will be secondary trash filled out for the money, and an afterthought.

It only kind of sucks as to what's here, because this starts out as a very respectable, well written incest story. But for some reason, the fool just leans so heavily into the moral dilemma of sleeping with someone that he KNOWS has no biological relation to him that this game might as well take place in Saudi Arabia. And the MC makes Woody Allen look like Sylvester Stallone by comparison. He actually thinks he can be arrested if he fucks an adult of no relation WITH HER CONSENT!

And then Patreon. One of the "perks" is 'tell me what the fuck to do'. William Shakespeare did NOT consult Patreon over whether or not Romeo and Juliet should get a happy ending.

Not a lot of people read it anymore. God knows I wouldn't have were I not Lord Capulet, but EVERYBODY knows the title at least. Patreon can only ever create 'Mad-Libs'. And that is where this game really falls apart.

This writer, I suspect grew up in the Middle East, at least a little. Or maybe their parents. Or maybe I'm wrong. I don't care about that, but it does affect their ability to write stories in English set in America. So, as Patreon demands more girls, the story becomes more incoherent. The story just devolves into the MC whining endlessly for each of the individual girls in his internal dialogue, and cockblocking himself with the girls.

What could have been a heartfelt story about most of the pieces of a shattered family coming back together in the aftermath of divorce. Instead it's this MC whining while he's awake, and then whining while he's asleep. He can't even let himself have a decent fucking dream.

Sadly, I wish that I could say that there are a lot of better stories out there. Unfortunately, this writing, even considering the neurotic MC, is still better than a LOT of other porn games. Paid or Free. Complete or Early Access.

At the end of the day, you should ignore this, just because it's dead. And even if, someday, the Dev comes back and finishes this. It will be as an afterthought, and trash. It's ALREADY borderline bad.