read it on the day of release, and I'm really enjoyed reading it! Lucius is an interesting character, and his design is great.
it's short, but that's to be expected in a short story before the main VN gets released. really looking forward to it and meet all these big guys on the cruise and get to know them better hehe~
my only nipicks are the backgrounds and text boxes. they need some work, as the text slips out on the sides and the backgrounds have weird perspectives, off details and coloring . but those are my only criticism, don't take what I've said too harshly.
anyway, can't wait to read more from you guys! ^.=.^