Sorry for commenting that late, i've only now found out how i can comment without indefinite moderation, so heres my honest feedback (maybe it could help somehow i hope idk)
ABSOLUTE PEAK.
Now to slight complaints:
No controls remapping, the second i forgor P is now the menu button i've lost my mind trying to save the game anywhere out of dialogues. Also arrow-keys walking.... ughhh. I mean, its bearable but wasd is base after all....as well as on the left of the keyboard)
I understand partial loading in the scenes, but its slow and now we can see BALD Alice and going slightly faster in moving scenes makes the sprites go quirky and float and such.
Also menu loads really slow, be it returning to a dialogue or moving to the menu on the start of the game or when leaving the "options" (it seems like its heavy to load, but is deloaded every time you leave it, consistently taking its sweet time as a result). If it IS anyhow at all fixable and you have enough will to, please try to find a way to optimize those transitions.
Text positioning has problems, yours (or not yours i dont really know) "forbidden ... [uhh] something" font is really small and often doesnt take the whole line of the textbox, while others are too big to keep the words in-borders.
Oh, and also MC wanted to know whats up with the "master" thing going on with Alice and didnt, but i believe you know how things are better made so i'll patiently wait for it to be revealed, if it shall be.
Just as a remind tho, ABSOLUTE PEAK, KEEP COOKING!