This game has really cool features!
I love when games are packed with tons of charisma and a well defined soul. I liked the dialogs and I respect that you took enough time to explain the main mechanics. This kind of puzzles is really unique, and even more in the context of the story.
I think the game could be expanded in so multiple ways. The main puzzle is basically based on clicking things in order. There's nothing wrong with that, but some bigger twists must be necessary to keep the good game pacing and surprise the players. Also, try to improve the clarity of the objects on screen, sometimes they were ambiguous, I had to restart multiple times just to get what were they.
You got and S tier game, that states for Ssssssincredible job!!