The game has a cute color palette, and I found that the words put me in sort of a trance. Likely because of the sexual implications of it all. While I find it hard to imagine the play structure, I don't necessarily think this is an issue. The act of reading itself felt almost like playing. I left my own reality, and became the doll, held by it's presumed creator. We share the same colour of clothing, implying some deeper bond beyond the structure of domination. This structure is supported by my limited dice pool, which will statistically results in 9s, right under the expected average of a d20: 10.5. The final sentence reinforces the trust between me and my dominator, asking for my consent.
A possible point of improvement could suggestion would be to try a 'wider' version of the game. This way the jams could all fit on 1 line. It could also reduce the amount of line breaks resulting in fewer orphans / widows. Though this might reduce the trance-like effect the text currently has, as the fact it was a bit hard to parse did add to the feeling I 'wasn't in control'.
Thank you for creating this experience. I feel closer to myself tonight having gone through it.