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The style is PHE NO ME NAL!

Visually, everything looks great and very cohesive. The music and sound design are also excellent, and the wind sounds recorded with a microphone are super funny part.

The dialogues are funny, the characters are nicely illustrated, and the world is presented really well.

From a gameplay perspective, there are a lot of cool ideas and interesting mechanics.

That said, gameplay wise the game is insanely difficult. From my own experience, when you balance a game by yourself, it’s easy to make it too hard because as the creator you know the mechanics inside out and practice them constantly while coding. It’s really worth having someone else test the game or making it a bit more forgiving, so players can experience the whole thing instead of giving up (like I did 😞).

The mechanics are explained through text. Personally, I love not reading text, skipping it, and then having no idea what’s going on. It would be great if the mechanics were explained more visually, for example with “Shift” written on a wall and an arrow pointing up near the green points.

I also got stuck once on the dialogues because I didn’t realize that Z skips them. That wasn’t obvious to me, since I don’t usually play games where skipping works that way.

I found one bug as well. If you slowly approach the edge where the camera changes position, you can step back after the camera switches, but the camera stays where it is. The player character is no longer visible, and it’s hard to tell what’s going on.

Overall, the game is fantastic. As a first game jam project, it’s almost perfect. The atmosphere is amazing and the game feels good to play. The only real downsides are that it’s too difficult and that it doesn’t communicate things to the player in an easy, intuitive way. Still, a great game!

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finelly a real feedback thank you sooo mhash for your help i relly relly relly helped me t know what to do and how to emprove

i can fix it exept for the play test part 

i dont have a lotte of frends and it was 4am when i submited so idk if thay were ewake or not but thank you for you comment

i am planning to make an other game now that i have a lotte more experionce in game coding and game disigning in generale

i allredy rated your game and it was a 5/5 you did a grate job just fix somme texturs bugs and it will be fine and i am locking forword to see your other games
and sorry for the english 😅

+ how did you know that i recorded the wind sound with my vois 😅

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I’m really glad I could help 🙂

Also, your English is honestly funny in a good way, it adds charm, and most importantly, it’s totally understandable. That’s what really matters.

I knew you recorded the wind sounds with your own voice because you mentioned it under another post when I asked about it earlier 😄

And actually, it’s me who’s really looking forward to your next games!