My personal overall thoughts:
7/10 - Story:as a fan of detective based games I found the concept to be rather enticing and very intriguing at face value
I do believe that the story has potential if it was expanded on a little bit more and dived a little deeper into the mysteries the game had to offer
8/10 - Mechanics:I managed to get through the entire game however base movement speed I feel could have been made a little bit faster
4/10 - Horror: There were a few moments that caught me by surprise although a few more scares to drive the tension would allow this rating to be higher
19/30 - Overall: I loved this short experience and with a few more bells and whistles could make for an outstanding horror game
Keep up the good work, it was fantastic :)