A really nice game. :)
I noticed a few small problems with the text (version 0.42a):
- "You know, I'm probably will sit at home."
- "Liz took a step back, slightly swaying. She had to lean on my arm to keep from falling. There is an awkward silence in the room." (last sentence: was instead of is)
- There was a kiss in the vampire conversation before the banana chips and then shortly after in the same conversation another one which was described as the first.
- In the chamomile tea on the couch dialogue there appears to be some Russian word in the English text.