really beautiful, visceral writing and art. even the chosen sound design pulled me into the story with so much immersion. everythings perfect its hard for me to find words. admittedly had to pause for misc. obligations but im close to finishing reading .! may find the words by then. thank u for the work <3
update: finished it ! but i neglected to take notes so i forgot everything i was going to say. i will say that the differences between how kenzie and deirdre narrates their day-to-day lives are notably distinct enough for me to gauge the lit. they read and how they perceive the world and it was very fun to realize i was reading the voice of kenzie's narration at the last bit in a livelier, storybook intonation compared to the vivid way i read through deirdre's. despite sharing little to Completely nil traits in personality and lives with all the characters, it was very easy to comprehend how it must feel in their perspectives and its inspiring even as someone who doesnt usually write. + realizing the little dark splotch/es in place of a caret were actually tears streaking the paper made me Tear Up. the same heartbreaking drop i felt when i saw kenzie rendered an etcetera / stranger after the break-in. beautiful art and beautiful writing as i keep saying and i wish some sort of further joy and hope for both of them. seeing the doll-mode (kig suit space?) esque writing in deirdre's postcard made me laugh though because Of Course she normally writes that way, even if i know she'd probably be discomforted by the predictability of her personality maybe. i like this