This was wonderful!! I loved how tidy the narrative arc is, culminating in that mirror scene--"Reflected back at me was a seemingly perfect image of Hotaru where I should have been", the MC disappearing. I liked that it ended with the shower, returning to your body but washing something off, letting it slide off you and into the drain. The tidy confines of the story alongside the really wonderful graphic design + layout make the whole thing feel like a discreet memory packaged in plastic, vacuum sealed from 10+ years ago.