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The art is undoubtedly very cute. I really liked the color palette you used — the shades of green, white, and pink were very pleasing to me. I also really enjoyed the perspective of the scene, which, despite being simple, is well done and fits the overall aesthetic.

From what I noticed, you emphasized the main elements by filling them with color, such as the traffic light and the characters themselves, while the rest remained simpler. This creates an interesting visual hierarchy for the composition of the story as a whole.

My only critique would be that it’s a little unclear whether only one of the characters wants to confess, or if both are thinking about telling each other they love one another.

I honestly thought the ending would be tragic haha, but it seems it wasn’t (thankfully — enough of sad endings). The sounds were pleasant and gave the scene a really relaxing and engaging vibe. The color changes reflect the protagonist’s inner state very well, which shows great care in expressing feelings beyond words.

Congratulations on the cutscene — it’s really well done and interesting, even if the intentions behind the confession weren’t entirely clear. I wish you the best of luck in the jam!

Thanks a lot for this feedback !! really appreciate these kind of feedback ,  also will try to improve myself so this kind of mistake does not happen in the future :)