Okkk here I am a little late but I'm here to give my latest feeds.
I really enjoyed the cutscene overall — the story, the narration, and how the theme is integrated all feel well thought out.
One thing I’d suggest is improving the performance, since I experienced some lag while watching it. I think polishing the font choice and adding a light visual filter to the environment could also make the scene feel even stronger visually.
That said, it’s a solid piece and a really nice narrative experience. Great job!
If you have time and feel like checking out my project as well, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it.