Another beautiful story about our beloved hero, Dick Storm! As always, you managed to strike a great balance between humor and tension, combined with the frenetic action of the scene. I’d say you have excellent potential for creating engaging stories, and that really shows in your cutscenes.
I found the way everything is presented simply amazing, from the immersive introduction (the first-person angle really makes us feel like we’re inside the scene) to the escape through the forest. Choosing to place the camera inside the vehicle was a great decision, as it fully captured the emotion of the chase—something that would likely have been lost with a more external angle.
The sound effects were very well used and are undoubtedly a strong point, contributing a lot to feeling even more connected to everything that’s happening to the character.
The only suggestion I have is regarding the text while the protagonist is inside the house, as I noticed that some of it ends up overlapping Dick’s animations. I wouldn’t say this interferes with the scene, but it could feel more dynamic if the text were placed elsewhere and followed a clearer visual hierarchy of text -> image. In this case, placing the speech bubbles next to Dick would naturally make it more intuitive to guide the viewer’s eyes from the text to the character. It may seem like a small detail at first glance, but it would certainly help make everything flow more smoothly (though to be clear, it’s already great as it is).
I would easily watch many more seconds of this scene if there were any, because I really enjoyed what you presented here. Keep up the great work, and best of luck in the jam!