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First time reading - after I finish the rest I plan to come back to see if my opinion has changed 

The thing I like most about this IF is finding hope/found 'family' in a place full of depravity (which I think is what this story is going for), I thought it was funny that my question of "does this involve werewolves?" Got called out lol. But I'm all for a mafia/gangster vibe 

Something I'm unsure about that is making me hesitate on giving my thumbs up for this IF, is that I can't tell how the story/chapters would work? Like will there be an overarching gang war thats kinda hinted at,  will it be MC being given a singular job and we just see the insights of that, will MC be going through multiple different mini (dark) storylines with different characters they can choose to be in a team with. I'm just not sure yet if this story is trying to be more worldbuilding focused with how the gangs work (with like factions and leaders and jobs and maybe how it all plays in the  real world) more mc focused really diving in and fleshing out any of the backstories and their impact, like would they use the resources they get for revenge? Would that be a big plot point. Or character focus, where we spend more time learning why each character chose this life, chose to stay. And thats where the found family stuff comes in 

Maybe a mix of multiple? 

Anyway just my general rambling thoughts for now!

I am a huge sucker for found family. This one would definitely have the element as well, but would have a darker twist to it, and maybe some of that "family" isn't the best either, so I can play with dynamics a good bit. Especially learning how your boss got her nickname. :3

This one would have a few things going on with the plot. I'd want to do more backgrounds for the MC so it would play a larger role as they try to find peace or resolution with whatever happened. Then there's Roz's "plans." That would still need to be fleshed out, but it's a bit bigger than a gang war, though that is a basic part of it. Whatever job the MC picks would dictate their role in any part of building this "empire." Like, as an example, the sex work isn't just sex work - it's intel, infiltration, a lure. I'd want to have a balance in the plotlines because I like my MCs to have a central focus, I don't want them to feel like a side character.

The Howl would be particularly large, and may take the most planning out of any of the projects unless I severely limited the jobs and backgrounds. I'd rather be able to provide a variety, it would just take a lot of time to plan. 

thankyou for the reply! That definitely clears up a few things (because don't get me wrong I'm always for sex/sexual aspects in IF() but I didn't see how that being our work would play into the big picture lol but now I def see how each job will contribute to our skills beyond how they seem on the surface level (like subterfuge) 

And it all definitely sounds very expansive and intense but I know if you do this story it'll be awesome 

(As a side note a more darker/toxic found family is so yummy)