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I love this!!!!! The art is probably my favourite part of it, it's so loose and sketchy but it's so pretty, I love the white on black you chose it makes it feel very complete without needing a lot of visual detail! The descriptions are also very vivid and lovely, I love the bit with the turtles yellow eyes, I can see it in my mind!! And the descriptions of the tallwalkers were pretty creepy yet very intriguing to think how it'd come across to other animals (and the mythos was a neat touch I really loved that!!!!)

I also think it's super interesting to have a mechanic where you sometimes genuinely just get unlucky, it means there's no certain winning no matter your class, and it's pretty accurate to real life. Sometimes you do everything right and you still fail (and get eaten by a bird...well ok maybe not that one....at least...hopefully not?)

Generally this game is really charming I love it :DDDD 

I did notice a couple typos, idk if those fall under minor bug fixes but if they do then here they are! Image

"Nevertheless, you know you it must be done."

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"Now fully weaned...with her when she goes forging,"

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"You shudder...wrapping your tale around your nose."

BUT yeah I really really enjoyed this!!!!! Excellent work :DDD

Hey, sorry for the late response! I've been cramming for my finals, but just wanted to say thank you for such a detailed and enthusiastic response. 

Thank you for the notes on the typos as well. No matter how many times I check, I always seem to miss some :') I have plans to try and push an update some time after I finish the semester that should include some of those fixes, as well as even a couple events that were cut from the original version (including a better ending), if I can manage it.

Also working on a 2.0 version of the game that will actually let you experience a full lifetime, including finding a mate and having kits of your own... But that's still a ways away.

Anyways, thank you so much again for the feedback, I really appreciate it!