Without a doubt, the highlight of this scene is the artwork. It’s incredibly well done and feels very unique. I really liked how you used lines to add color while also giving depth to the elements. As an artist, I can confidently say this is a great example of minimalist depth done right.
That said, I felt the colors were a bit too intense on the eyes. I understand the scene is short, but it could still be uncomfortable for some viewers. It might be interesting to have the colors gradually lose brightness or intensity as the story progresses, reflecting the character’s emotions through the surrounding world, especially since he becomes quite upset about the delay.
It would also be interesting to add the reason why she couldn’t arrive on time, even if it were through a static or very quick scene, since you still had a few extra seconds to work with. That said, I understand it might not have been possible, after all, creating a scene is more work than it seems haha.
Great work! Wishing you success and good luck in the jam!