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Good entry, but with a bit more of a story this could be even better. I did not quite get what happened in the end that it was "too late" for something. It felt like the scene was not over yet. The art looks nice, colors fit well, though the hair of the women is kinda 'cut' on the right side (probably happened during import/export?). Except for the traffic light that did not quite fit the style. The cutscene itself is quite short, but I liked the overall atmosphere. I really expected the women to be hit by a car in the end actually :D

Overall, good entry, just needs something...more...?

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Thanks for the feedback!!! i guess last scene is confusing to many viewers at first i though that it would look good if i leave it for the viewer to decide what happened between them  but i guess it didn't work as it get mismatched with the theme.  

for the art part i agreed to it as some pixels were there and i think i should fixed that but i didn't, i don't know i guess i was just to lazy to open the photoshop and remove that but whatever, for now  its done.

for the traffic light it just not working for me, if i added with the background it could be confusing as it would not show any dominance to the scene where it is a key component for the cutscene and color just don't working it for some reason  , i thought it would not mean that much to viewer but to think so many viewer notice that, it help me in future cutscene to care for small details also.

well there could be more if the jam gave us more than 5 seconds :) just kidding