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Thanks for the kind words, I very much appreciate it. Glad you liked the mixed media attempt.  I had a lot of fun experimenting with it and I think there's a lot of room for improvement with some extra polish like you said.

I made all the sounds in the very early morning hours of submission day and felt like an absolute madman doing so lol. Cool to hear you appreciated the effort. The cinematography is definitely odd. I think I leaned to far into the indie film artsy fartsy realm and lost out on a more cohesive plot development. This did result in a pretty unique look, but I don't think the lack of story clarity was worth the trade off. I wonder if adding things like walls (like you said in the first paragraph) would help bring more reality to the overall presentation and bridge that gap a little better. Something to consider going forward.

I'm really glad to hear you've enjoyed my last couple entries. Without trying to sound too pretentious, I've been trying to make stuff that is more self-expressive and its cool to hear positive feedback on that. I will definitely keep grinding, I'm having a blast making stuff and GoedWare Jams/Community is as good as any I've come across on itch. I think learning some art fundamentals might make a good new endeavor.

Thanks again for the comment, and can't wait to see what Dick Storm is up to this time!!!