I like this entry, although for me the screen seemed to be cut (?). It did not work in fullscreen either...The time limit fits, but what is missing is the proof of real-time rendering. The art style is gorgeous and feels very polished, except one thing: Text bubbles seem to have a green outline that feels like "green screen" was somehow used...(?) It feels like the story is not fitting that well to the theme "5 seconds too late"... What was actually too late within this scene? Maybe you can explain further, as I don't quite get what you mean within your description of the submission.
Still: Good entry!